Revising and Revising Diary, Part Three

I’m getting close or at least closer. I’ve drawn a few more pages, made a few more edits, and sent a draft of this comic to several friends. So waiting to hear back from those trusted readers (thank you!) seems like a natural time to pause. At least for now.

Ironically, people seem to like either the colors I have now or options that don’t depart from the current colors too radically. Similar, while in this case I’m polling only myself, I haven’t come across any radical revisions to the structure of the comic that make sense. At the same time, some definitely feels a little off. I can’t put my finger on it. Maybe the answer will be obvious in a few months or a few years…